A COLLECTIONS OF POETRY
i hope they were happy with that dead chicken...which obviously become a poet...smiles. interesting verse...thanks for linking up to one shot!
A very vivid but sad piece, thanks for sharing
That was so sad... beautifully written too. thank
Thought provoking but so beautiful...thanks for sharing my friend x
a very well written poem that really had me thinking..was it one of joy or one of sadness...but from its roots merged the person you are..a very talented poet..thanks for sharing Pete
a sad one..but well put in words i agree..thanks for sharing with one stop..:)
The dead chicken was what they needed!!!This was well written - not a touch of sadness but strength tooThanks for sharing with One ShotSmiles from the Moon
This made my heart sad for the child who heard this. I grew up bearing mental self-images of many an epithet, and though in the end they made me strong, I would rather have done without them. Dead chicken in lieu of a "beautiful curly redhead baby" sounds especially cruel.
You should post links to your work on Writer's Island EllenElizabeth, the Islanders would like your work......rob